“Arr-ffaa!”
As the first pain reached into her body she sobbed, not with the hurt but with relief. Her long, longing wait was over.
He said nothing. He hadn’t spoken yet. But there had been two canes resting beside her right flank. Now there was only one.
A nice image, I liked the story very much, JM.
Thank you!
I think this story may end here, because the waiting is over. And though the action, once it started, was hot too, it’s a different story.
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I literally held my breathe reading the passage. Captivating image. I love the stripe so much.
Awwww…. Thank you very much!
I’m afraid the one stripe didn’t stay lonely for long. Though the caning was only a scenesetter, as well.
The sex was the thing.
I like this so much.
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It was hard keeping the words down, for a logorrheac bastard like me. I’m just not much of a minimalist, really.
A delightful image compounded by the minimalist words, xxx
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That’s as minimalist as I get.
“More is more,” is my motto.
Beautiful.
I need it like that sometimes
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I’m planning to experiment more with making girls wait, quite soon …
And I’ve already been waiting for over 5 months…
Lovely mark. Great image ?
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Glad the post made its … Oh, never mind.
That one simple cane mark says so much
Mollyx
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It speaks of desire. And it tells that it’s soon going to be joined by many many others, just like it. (You let one cane stripe in, and suddenly …)
One line to decorate her bottom and the knowledge that there might be another one. Oh, the anticipation!
Rebel xox
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That was most definitely the train of thought I was trying to give my Arethusa, in the moment, and I tried to capture some of that with the photo.
Oh wow. Beautiful simplicity x x
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It helped that Arethusa is simply beautiful.
Such anticipation…
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That simple single cane stroke…simply beautiful.
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It’s a border, really, signalling the end of one time period (waiting) and the beginning of the next (sensory overload).
What a great line across
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I like the straight and the curved: it’s a very beautiful combination.
Beautiful image with beautiful words x
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And glad to hear you’re up and about again!
I love the story you tell with this, with just a few words and an image I get an entire story.